Certainly! Here's a more polished version of your text in English:
"The hotel is amazing, very beautiful inside, and the staff are very friendly and nice. However, there were a few things I didn't like. I sent a message to the hotel when I made the booking, mentioning that one of the guests have a birthday, and I asked if they could do something special in the room for the occasion. On the day of the birthday, I left some money on the bed in two rooms, mine and a friend's, hoping the staff would arrange something nice, perhaps some flowers. Unfortunately, they didn't do anything special but took the money. I believe the manager should address this with the staff. Additionally, we found a pillow in our bags wich the stuff take it for keeping before checkin , that was very dirty, and when we asked for it to be cleaned, it wasn't done thoroughly. Lastly, at check-in, also on the check in I asked that my room should be farder from room of my friends, and when we went to the numbers, it was very close .. so I’m not very happy with stuff, but the hotel still amazing . Also massage was super good .